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The lyrics are confusing. I'd love to hear what that one is really all about. Nice song.
Posted by mattt regarding 'She Lies'

It's a good straight ahead pop song, but it still needs some work.
Posted by hammer regarding 'She Lies'

I like the guitar playing a lot. The vocals not so much. I think your songs are good, but need more traditional vocals to be taken seriously. Don't get me wrong, I think you are good and have a lot of talent.
Posted by jtees4 regarding 'coco'

I like the rhythm guitar riff. Sounds old school but with a new twist. The vocals work with this one better than some of your others. The vocals in the chorus are too strained. I think it is a good song.
Posted by mattt regarding 'coco'

Nice rhythm guitar stuff. I like the song in general. The vocals seem a little forced if that makes sense. Pretty good.
Posted by mattt regarding 'No Name'

Pretty intro. I like the change into the guitar bit. The vocals are OK but not up to par with the rest of the music...you have to find your own vocal, not try to sound like James H. Good song, needs to be shorter.
Posted by jtees4 regarding 'No Name'

Very traditional sounding which is OK. Probably sounded much better live than the recording.
Posted by mattt regarding 'Treat Me This Way'

I like the guitar work. The recording wasn't the best, but it was good for a live recording. The vocal was not loud enough in the mix. I'd love to hear that song in a studio version because all the chops are there, and the singing would sound much better. Good stuff.
Posted by jtees4 regarding 'Treat Me This Way'

The only criticism I can make is maybe there's a little too much high hat in this! Otherwise, a great song!
Posted by annalea regarding 'Set Me Free'

I started liking this song at about 1:24. From the start of the song to that point, I wanted to know what the heck was going on! The instruments could come to the foreground a bit and the vocal not quite so loud, I think. Don't get me wrong. I like the song!
Posted by annalea regarding 'MY WINGS MADE OF GLASS'

This song sort of fades IN.....different! It really is a song all wierd, but interesting indeed! Great percussion throughout. It could be maybe a bit shorter, I think, seeing that it is indeed WIERD!lol. I can only take so much wierd. I don't know what kind of dreams I'm going to have tonight!
Posted by annalea regarding 'A Tone All Weird'

Totally interesting and fabulous intro! God, I'm loving this! It's like a story of my tortured life up to 1:30, then it starts to get all sentimental and bluesy, again, just like my life! Now I'm gettin' some Santana vibes just around 3:00. This song has a real "life on the street" feel - earthy. Man, what a jam! It's a fairly long song, and I never lost interest once!
Posted by annalea regarding 'Renegade'

Not my favorite type of music but you are a very good guitar player and you know how to let it all hang out without holding anything back. I like it.
Posted by hammer regarding 'Renegade'

Excellent guitar tone, very early SantanaISH. I can't really hear the reggae in it...but I believe you. Pure modern jazz to me. Is there any kind of music you DON'T play? Good stuff.
Posted by jtees4 regarding 'Renegade'

You can play!..but I feel some of the experimental stuff sounds almost forced as opposed to just normal improv. Sounds like competing musical keys...not pleasant sounding which I know was not the goal.
Posted by hammer regarding 'A Tone All Weird'

I don't really like the "competing" guitars...one alone would be better to me. There is a certain hardness to the beat and rhythm together that i like a lot. I think if you remove the lead stuff and just use the backing track it would be a great basis for a song.
Posted by jtees4 regarding 'A Tone All Weird'

Pretty good. You might want to check the spelling in the title (you're instead of your).
Posted by sudoplatov regarding 'TELL THEM YOUR A FRIEND OF MINE'

The transition to the second part could be better marked. Perhaps a bass or drum riff. And the accompanent style in the second section needs a bit more contrast with the first section. The harmonies are OK, it's more the arrangement that needs a bit of tweaking.
Posted by sudoplatov regarding 'WRAPED UP IN PRETTY PAPER'

""THIS SONG IS ACTULLY A POAM THAT MY BROTHER WROTE WHEN HE WAS AT THE END OF HIS DRUG ADDICTION. HE IS A FAN OF PINK FLOYED. SO I ACTUALLY MADE TWO RECORDINGS OF THIS. THE OTHER SONG IS SLOW AND IS A BETTER FIT TO MY STYLE. MY MOM LIKE STHE OTHER ONE BETTER SO MAYBE I'LL PUT IT ON AND GET YOU FEED BACK. THANKS FOR YOU INPUT AND I AM LISTENING""
Posted by CHARLIE GAIL regarding 'MY WINGS MADE OF GLASS'

I like the beginning, but as the song progresses it is not as good as most of your others. This style does not suit you as well as others.
Posted by jtees4 regarding 'MY WINGS MADE OF GLASS'